BÀI MẪU WRITING TASK 2 BAND 8.0 (PHẦN 2)

Cùng English Zone tìm hiểu theo các bài essay mẫu band 8.0 để cùng phân tích, học thêm từ vựng dưới để viết Task 2 tốt hơn nhé.

Formal education occurs in a structured environment whose explicit purpose is teaching students. Usually, formal education takes place in a school environment with classrooms of multiple students learning together with a trained, c

Some people believe that it is wrong to keep animals in zoos, while others think  that zoos are both entertaining and ecologically important. Discuss both views. In this modern world, perspectives of how to keep animals are varied among people. Some people think about caging them in zoos or forests while others think  it is illogical to limit animals’ movements. I am going to discuss these views  

according to environmental, personal and economic perspectives. Keeping some animals in zoos will protect them against predators, bad weather,  and food inavailability. Nevertheless, keeping animals free is more logical than  isolating them because if we keep animals caged, they would not be able to have fresh air and chase other animals. Therefore, it is cruel keeping animals confined in small spaces. It is advisable to put our efforts into keeping our creatures in their  natural habitats, in order to give them the opportunity to experience normal life. Keeping animals is essential because some animals are in fact becoming extinct.  Although keeping these animals is costly, the profits made by keeping these  animals are substantial. Take Indian lions for example; a wide range of people  travel to India to see these animals in circuses in India. However, some people  think that governments should invest the money in improving the infrastructure  of their nations instead. Building new electrical power station, for instance, is  more important than spending thousands of pounds to preserve certain creatures  from extinction. Lastly, keeping animals is important for study and research  whereas others think we have no right to use animals for entertainment and in  labs. 

To conclude, keeping animals in zoos might have values but it is irrational to keep  these animals away from their natural habitat. The reasons are that besides they  are not vulnerable creatures, they have the right to survive independently because  of having feelings and emotions as human. 

(289 Words) Band 9 

Các cụm từ cần nhớ 

cage(v): nhốt trong chuồng 

food inavailability: sự khan hiếm thức ăn 

confine(v): nhốt (trong một khu khép kín) 

irrational(adj): vô lý

Đăng ký học cùng English Zone để tăng level Tiếng Anh thật nhanh nhé!

 Hệ thống Anh ngữ English Zone

️ CS1: NV4.25 KĐT Viglacera Tây Mỗ – 272 Hữu Hưng – Phường Tây Mỗ – Quận Nam Từ Liêm – Hà Nội

️ CS2: FLC Garden City BT SA10 – KĐT Garden City

 CS3: English Zone Online

 03.433.98.433

 Email: contact@englishzone.vn